Nevin&Peter

= Nevin & Peter = .

.Peter:I am glad you have these comments,and when I consider these comments I find it out that actually that day I was quite nervous.I done many stupid things that I even could't find unless your comments.However, I think that is the way how can I improve.
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The followings are comments from the classmates & me. To present their comments precisely, **I do not change any of their wordings**. Please take the comments positively. J

Read the comments carefully. Some comments are contradictory; you should think about those comments more carefully to figure out the reasons. ** After reading the comments, write down your feedback to the audience. **

1. Very interesting opening, like movie. 2. Nickhun is so handsome! 3. They provide MV to support their presentation but count for too more times. 4. Transitions should be improved. 5. Being silent when taking turns presenting. Two speakers did not switch smoothly. 6. Notice the fluency when changing PPT pages. 7. The PPT should line out the points, not just the covers of CD albums, and should define elements in the songs you played. 8. I think you can list the difference and make us more clearer.

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Proposal of the informative speech
**I.** **Definition of “Culture"** Nowadays, we live in global village. There are so many ways for us to get to know other countries, including the way they live, the food, architects, music, work of arts, etc. It is culture, to be exact. Culture expressed a variety of messages. Messages could be delivered not only by words but also by lyrics with melody- music.  **II.** **Topic: (To give a temporary topic.)** Music from different cultures  **III.** **Rationales: (To explain why the topic you choose fits your definition of “culture.)** It is easy for us to say it out that we love music. And moreover, we might be asked which type of music we are fund of. However, we rarely look into the background of each how did each type of music to originate from, base on which culture. With Hip hop, African music, or our music from a traditional opera, we would like do some research to get to know how they came from in different cultures. **IV.** **Preview (To briefly introduce the topic, and tell the possible directions you are going to probe into the topic.)** Music is all around the world, and even we can hear that every day. As a result, what is the connection between music and culture? The connection between music and culture is that music is a kind of way to express culture .In history, daily life, or even in ceremonies, music will be used. There are all kinds of music types .In West, there will be hip-hop, rap....In Asia, there will be Chinese opera. Then, basically we will introduce some music like the above mentioned. Finally, we will show the connection between music and culture. Next, we will show how the music is going on the culture. **V.** **Significance (To explain the importance of knowing this topic.)** Music is a fully a reflection of culture, especially in our daily life with the emotional changes. We can fully realize the culture from the music of one specific group. Furthermore we can grasp the way of their living easily by doing so. To sum up, music is not only melody and lyrics we listen to but also deserve us to get to know more and deeply.

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